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Think

Contributed by perfection on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:08:24 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Look at me in the face,
What do you see?
Do you see who I really am?
Do you know that I do care?
Can you tell who I will be?
Or who I will even be with?
Now look into my heart,
It is the key to my life and feelings.
My heart will tell you all these things
It could tell you even more.
Be careful with this key,
Because it can break very easily.
I’ll let you look into my heart,
You can take a peak.
Please care for what you see
For not many people can look.
You are one that I have chosen
To look into my heart.
Now remember what you see
It could be your last like to look at me,
To look into my heart.
We say our last good-byes,
You’ve done way too much.
You got drunk and drove me here,
To a place no one wants to be.
We crashed into an electric pole
And sparks went everywhere.
Somehow you survived and walked away,
But for me I’m lying here crushed in the car.
I see a white light at the end of a tunnel
And I’m trying to resist,
Because I don’t want to die.
All I did was let you see,
How I really did trust you,
And let you look into my heart.
I can’t hear you crying!
I can’t hear anything!
All I hear is a harp playing,
And a voice saying, “Come here.”
You killed me!
You let my key brake!
How could you do that when I trusted you with it?
I shouldn’t be lying in this smashed car going towards a tunnel.
Next time someone lets you look into their heart.
They should think twice,
Because….
Drinking, driving, and love don’t mix!!
Drinking can kill you,
Driving while drunk can kill you,
But….
Driving the one you love while drunk can kill her!
~Think~ don’t do that to the one you love

By: Sarah Bumgardner
On April 9, 2003

Copyright © perfection ... [ 2004-02-26 20:08:24]
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Re: Think (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 12:16:36 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! This is the first poem I have read of yours and it had alot of truth in it. Thank you for sharing it. Kie

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