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The Wonderland
Contributed by
garyh
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Waking up a blissful morning
Walk to the back and see the trees
With mountains in behind
The beautiful colors
From green meadows to
Red-orange in leaves
The blue skies above
The yellow-orange dawn
Beautiful pigments throughout the earth
No sound or pollution to obstruct its beauty
Everything so clean and clear
Is everything I hold dear
Copyright ©
garyh
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2004-02-26 19:01:36]
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Re: The Wonderland
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by Remy on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:06:00 PM AEST
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& in comes... nevermind... lol, don't ask... Good write, nature's calm sway is exemplified here. Love it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Wonderland
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:06:56 PM AEST
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| Vividly colorful. I could almost smell the dew - but unfortunately you declined to include it, yet that's me being pedantic. Your words painted a very pretty picture for me - thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: The Wonderland
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by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:20:24 PM AEST
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| very nice.......... and would be nice to sit on a blanket and just look ... sandy |
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Re: The Wonderland
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by Putteragain on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:43:16 PM AEST
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well it was well worth the wait and i could see alll the colors as if i were there
michelle |
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Re: The Wonderland
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:50:17 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write! |
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Re: The Wonderland
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by wolfdreamer on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:18:03 PM AEST
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| How lucky you are to have such a view. A beautiful scene, thanks for sharing.~~**~~ |
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Re: The Wonderland
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by Kie on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:47:36 PM AEST
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| I thought your poem was excellent I look forward to the next one. Kie |
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