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^^Shattered^^

Contributed by echomywurdz on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

There are not to many people that are quite like you
None of them can do the things to me that you do

You have those eyes that express more than words can say
Showing complicating emotions that almost seem unreal

One look from you and everything in your life jumps from you into me
Its almost as if your life flashes before me, i see what you see

I feel your pain, i just don't see it in your eyes
And those times when your standing there spacing out i become hypnotized

In a trance thats so twisted and horrid
Like a nightmare but I'm not scared

And every time this happens i see the same things
Its basically you standing there as you begin to sing

Sing a tune that I don't know
And whisper to yourself softly we cannot go

And when the tune your singing comes to an end
You fall to your knees and in your one gasping breath yell goodbye dear friend

And your eyes shatter like broken glass
and i loose all feelings because i felt through you, you were the emotion of me

Once your eyes shattered i could feel my heart shatter to
This was the end not only for me but you

But i still don't understand what everything had meant
Why did everytime you take me there to see what would end up to come to be?

Well now i know what you were trying to do
You were trying to break free, not from the world, but the emotion of me

Because you knew when you left i would to
But this was something you just didn't want to see go through

But you didn't understand that without you I'm incomplete
So even if you broke free you'd still end up going with me

And this you wouldn't mind
But you couldn't stand seeing me not alive

So you tried to save me which only i knew and could see
And though were both gone i can still see the things in your eyes that could had be

But in the end we still both left the same way
Your shattered eyes, my shattered heart...

It was our fate

Copyright © echomywurdz ... [ 2004-02-26 18:54:20]
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Re: ^^Shattered^^ (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:04:07 PM AEST
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Oi pa, let it rest... it'll take time, but yea... shatered heart sucks! Good writing on this stuff...
~Remy~

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