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POLISHING SILVER
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:41:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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SUPERNATURAL-UNREAL-THIS DESIRE IN MY SOUL- THE ONE I FEEL----SO BAD IT HURTS INSIDE- THE ONE IM BEING DEPRIVED
OF - CANT YOU SEE IT IN MY EYES? YOUR UNCERTAINTY MYSTIFIES ME SOMEHOW-RIGHT NOW- AS I GAZE INTO YOUR POLAROID EYES- MYSTICAL - CHARMING - SOMEHOW CALLING ME TO YOU- WHAT HAVE YOU DONE? INHABIT MY HEART - MADE A PART
FOR YOURSELF-
SET IT ON A SHELF TO COLLECT
DUST-RUST-AND ONE DAY YOU'LL POLISH YOUR SILVER?
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PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-02-26 17:41:18] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: POLISHING SILVER
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:26:14 PM AEST (User
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very good.
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Re: POLISHING SILVER
(User Rating: 1 ) by uchendu on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:41:37 PM AEST (User
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This is great poem, and i wonder what really inspired this. I can feel that i am being addressed in this piece.. welldone friend! Please comment on my works too |
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