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Falling Skies
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:41:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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I keep my feelings locked away
in the chambers of my heart
I won't tell you what I think
i'll continue to play my part
I have reached the deepest fathom
in the sea of your dreams
we're stuck here in this fantasy world
where nothing is what it seems
everything i've been told
is nothing but a pack of lies
so now won't you stay with me
and watch the falling skies?
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kailadragon
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2004-02-26 15:41:51]
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Re: Falling Skies
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by Remy on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:43:52 PM AEST
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I would imagine with a closed heart it's a tad difficult to recirprocate anything that goes in your deep fathom, but maybe that's just me. I wanna see falling skies...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Falling Skies
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:07:04 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, love your expression, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Falling Skies
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by EternitysLyre on
Tuesday, 16th March 2004 @ 01:05:58 PM AEST
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Fantasy world indeed...quite a good poem, constructing images that none have seen yet all can appreciate. The conceit of fathoms and dreams was also quite refreshing and pleasant.
Dreamily done.
"To be a writer is to spend an hour looking for one word, but making one word more meaning than all the world."
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