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Sweetheart (Pt. II)
Contributed by
remy
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:14:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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you're nearby...
i can feel you close as ever
but look outside
you'll seen the landscape blurry
it's not because of the rain
nor the glaze of the sun rays
just the heart wrenched pain
it doesn't know a time of day
i'm not quite out to change
not you nor me nor anything
these tear drops feel strange
but that's another nothing
not like the icing on the pie you'd never eat
not near the aching lack of a working family
not the shows and afterglows we kept discreet
not all those waning hours made of something
don't shut eye...
i'll feel you closer still
don't even cry
it's not such a jagged pill
the day will drone out longer
while the food tastes too stale
the night makes me even weaker
i'm not too frail but pale
losing weight but not heart
and certainly not yours
while the weeks pull apart
i'll remember from before
like the droning drives made from far beyond
like the background noise we shared in a song
like your eyes locking mine as i went along
like my heart i gave, yours i grew quite fond
i meant what i said
i mean it ever still
i know that you've left
still...
sweetheart...
today i'll think of you.
just like all the other days
until i've left i will stay true
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-02-26 15:14:32]
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Re: Sweetheart (Pt. II)
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:03:47 PM AEST
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| mmmm beautifully sadly bittersweet........ hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Sweetheart (Pt. II)
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:50:06 PM AEST
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REALLY IMPRESSIVE WELL WORDED! HAS ALOT OF HEART & THAT'S GREAT!! A VERY NICE WRITE!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: Sweetheart (Pt. II)
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:51:11 PM AEST
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| whoa... so beautiful, so sad, ............... |
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Re: Sweetheart (Pt. II)
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by jbrow on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:31:24 PM AEST
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I love the way that you use words expend the minde of your readers as aways great write.
p's
Gene |
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Re: Sweetheart (Pt. II)
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by secretwind on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:39:44 AM AEST
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| Ahhhh sweet..... |
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