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Bottomless
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 02:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Invisible laughter----
falling on my knees----
and I can't help this conversation if you would bleed it a conversation, I think I need a damn translation, to breed myself an explanation.
And I kept a straight face as I yelped how I felt you had used me as a stepping stone and I said that I did not believe in pecking order in a home or love at first sight, further more everything turned into a joke, you provoke me to love you and warn me I should hate you.
I'm so glad this is all a joke for you.
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Re: Bottomless
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by Remy on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:34:23 PM AEST
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Such animosity, well at least you don't bottle it all up! Interesting, I remember feeling like this a long while ago.... good writing! ;0)
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Re: Bottomless
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by dolly_dagger on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:14:12 PM AEST
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| "breed an explanation"....i'm lovin' it. |
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Re: Bottomless
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:23:27 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO!BRAVO! See there how your talent shines through here. Wish I could hear you up on that stage........Great write Chris........Sarcasm! Can be used for serious explanations......but can also be tantilizing....like this one! This is really unique...one of the best poems I've had the privilege of reading.........keep them coming Chris.......this one was very special indeed!
love you
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