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Ironic Perceptions
Contributed by
PoeticRequiem
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 02:09:36 PM in AEST
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The eyes of longing shed a tear
for the folly of youth portrayed in
the absence of burden.
Gestures of warm hearted dissolution
conveyed across iminent boundaries;
and the caress of lamenting sorrow
lies in the form of despairs' discourse.
Incompassion pantented in cruel invention
and marketed as unrelenting love?
Only in freedoms birth is slavery allowed
to smile in mockery of its ideals.
Can you still remember the day when
peace betrayed itself to rage?
These are just observations in the
spotlight of the mortal stage.
By; Jeremiah D. Normich
(The Wordsmith)
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Re: Ironic Perceptions
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by Remy on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:49:19 PM AEST
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Your perceptions are clouded in a midst of poetic jargon, though i must admit - i love that last line, much as I hate the idea of mortality. Anywho, good write!
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Re: Ironic Perceptions
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 03:51:44 AM AEST
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| outstanding vocabulary, but remember simplisity is easily comprehended by all, and complexity understood by a few. |
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