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I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
Contributed by
JJTiger
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:29:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I am falling deeply in love with you
When you are near there are so many things I want to do
I don't know what has come over me
To look upon you is my heart's only plea
When I look upon your fair face
It send my heart into a race
I wish to reach out and grab your hand to hold
For without it my life would seem so cold
I want to kiss your lips so sweet
And I know the moment our lips meet
My heart will skip a beat
But even that would not quench this heat
When I hear your voice so elegant
I know for me it was meant
For it is lovely music to my ears
Which washes away all my fears
With your every word so cheerful
It gives me heart a strong pull
I am obsessed with your charms
I ache to hold you in my longing arms
The more about you I learn
I realize the love in my heart will always burn
You are who my heart will forever adore
And I ask for nothing more
This is a feeling I cannot forget
For it all seems to perfectly fit
This all is so real
I just want you to know how I feel
Copyright ©
JJTiger
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2004-02-26 13:29:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by jbrow on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:35:50 PM AEST (User
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I like this one it's very sweet.
p's
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:10:47 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful expression of your feelings, JJ.
Welcome to YPDC site....the best poetry site on the net!!
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 03:50:38 PM AEST (User
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I Soo LOVE this poem! Tiger is a good friend of mine anyways, & I just love all the poems he writes. Keep up the good work Tiger! woo hoo!!!
Your #1 Fan! *lol*
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:07:04 PM AEST (User
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good poem, tiger.
what i really wanna know is...
whose it aboooout? hahhaha *nudge nudge* share the details with me, boy!
:) i'm a good comment poster, huh?
(the best!)
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Yodo on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 11:38:50 PM AEST (User
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You know how I feel about love poems. Once in a good while...
But you're my bud, so I'll tell you something. Keep writing. I don't care if it's about mush or not, just keep writing.
you rawk |
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 11:48:11 PM AEST (User
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I love this Poem. Its great! Your the first boy I have talked to..to even write poems like this. I like it a lot. I love reading poems too. So keep it up.
Love
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Re: I Just Want You To Know How I Feel
(User Rating: 1 ) by JusMeOtay on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 12:41:54 AM AEST (User
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Tiger-
hey bud...its a sweet poem you have there. Lil advice...don't try to rhyme. it doesn't have to. i think...as long...as you say what you mean its good. Wonderful job expressing yourself...*waves*
-Jeni |
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