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Darkness
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:43:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Creepy things
lurk in the darkness,
on a moonless
summer night.
The wind howls,
animals hide
from a danger
that is near.
Red eyes
peer through the
misty dark woods,
a creature
unknown to man.
It leaves branches
on trees broken,
dead animals
lying around,
nobody knows
what it is.
It lurks in
the darkness.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.11/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-02-26 09:43:54]
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:28:10 AM AEST
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food for thought i like this keeps you thinking.
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:01:55 PM AEST
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| And to think, I have been sitting outside, all alone, watching fireflies. What was I thinking? This sounds like the stories we used to make up and tell at church camp to scare each other to death before bedtime. This is good. |
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Re: Darkness
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:30:09 PM AEST
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| oooo sounds like the panther we have up here, great write, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Darkness
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:49:37 PM AEST
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:( I'm scared... *hides in his room*. Very good poem the imagery was very good and creepy. Well done.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Darkness
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:23:18 PM AEST
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| Sorry!!! that was me, didn't mean to scare you, Cynthia!! lol. But really, it was an awsome poem. Really painted a picture. Great write!!! |
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