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LR2
Contributed by
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:01:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Trail white
Calming.
Blind.
Free
in your mind
and through your eyes
you create your plan
to escape.
Too long have you been drifting
twisting
floating in the summer breeze
There are dark clouds on the horizon
A childs hand reaches through the grey
Taking your soul
and killing your heart.
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Re: LR2
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:06:24 PM AEST
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| i am really impressed, with the little amount of words you composed this of you really made a huge impression. you can clearly tell what is going on in this and hopefully you can escape until its too late! but like your writing said your heart has been killed, hopefully not! wonderful writing. |
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Re: LR2
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 02:21:15 PM AEST
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| I REALLY LIKE THIS AND SOMEHOW RELATE GOOD WRITING |
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