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Reality
Contributed by
silent
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 06:04:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As I walk underneath the cities sky
I watch as people pass me by
Watching for comfort, finding suspicion
Wishing for a different vision
Trapped in the worlds delusion that we call life
Lead me from this place, which is a haze of the reality I long to live.
Copyright ©
silent
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2004-02-26 06:04:14]
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Re: Reality
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by bj on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:05:43 AM AEST
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| Have been there a long time..thank you..You define it so well |
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Re: Reality
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 10:44:48 AM AEST
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excellent write it sums up how cynical and suspicious the human nature is.....
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Re: Reality
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 05:59:27 PM AEST
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| Good poem full of reality. |
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Re: Reality
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by Oneir8dude on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 11:43:20 PM AEST
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Noce work... I say live it don't long for it...
You are your own master...
You and you only hold the key to your future...
Thank You
Bill |
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