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Sorry.
Contributed by
juzzy
on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:34:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm sorry that I was
such a disappointment
not a trophy that you
could prize and flaunt.
I'm sorry I'm not
What you wanted
What you could be proud of
What you could love to love.
I watched you
bathe in your glory
Hoping someday
I would do the same in my own success.
I'm sorry you had to
Put up with their remarks
And bow your head in shame
As they sneer at us.
I'm sorry that I
never fit in the mould
I'm sorry that I
was such a letdown.
If only you would listen...
Copyright ©
juzzy
... [
2004-02-26 01:34:32] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: Sorry.
(User Rating: 1 ) by apollo on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 02:47:58 AM AEST (User
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this is a really vivid poem. i understand what ur talking about how u think u did not live up to "their" standards. dont let it get u down. this poem is wonderful. |
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Re: Sorry.
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygodslove on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:45:29 PM AEST (User
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sounds like your telling someone off here... good poem.. but also i see that they feel like your nothing special... but you are... GOD DONT MAKE JUNK... sandy nice poem. |
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