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SWINGING ON A STAR (Rennet)
Contributed by
Del
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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let's make believe
just you and I
are swinging on a star
so alone together
away from all our troubles and cares
Copyright ©
Del
... [
2004-02-26 00:55:46]
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Re: SWINGING ON A STAR (Rennet)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet but very good it reminds me of that old song swing on a star well done |
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Re: SWINGING ON A STAR (Rennet)
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:12:11 AM AEST
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SHORT & SWEET BUT WORTH THE HEARTBEATS!
DAN!! |
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Re: SWINGING ON A STAR (Rennet)
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:47:00 PM AEST
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| Hei, I love this, but will want to swing away from all our troubles, but with cares..You have ur inspiration and I can appreciate you creating an ideal world out of 5 short lines and 22 simple words.. you are very creative. Please comment on my works too |
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