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Losing Control
Contributed by
Twitch06
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:22:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Everyone thinks the same.
We think that everything is possible.
But once you cross the impossible path,
You lose control. You lose yourself down that road.
Just before it sinks in,
You think of all the sad things that happened first.
Then thinking of all the good times.
But either way, you still lose control of your thoughts.
You just want to escape from the pain.
The pain in your heart, and the pain of your memories.
Just knowing that there's something wrong,
Will make you weep through the rest of your days.
Staying up all night crying,
Won't solve or relieve anything,
You just have to deal with it.
It's not your fault if the problem is forced in your memory.
But it is your fault for letting it get to you.
There are many reasons for just one simple thing.
But what reason are you going to take?
When you lose control of everything,
You don't know how to put yourself back on the tracks.
Copyright ©
Twitch06
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2004-02-25 23:22:53]
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Re: Losing Control
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:35:42 PM AEST
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Very good work here!
Very strong write!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Losing Control
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:51:34 AM AEST
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| first off, wonderful expression of feelings and youve come across beautifully, on a personal note, i hope your doing alright, i was told twice i had only months to live and went through all these feelings too, but then the docs said oops, how lovely yeah, but never give up hope and try to live each moment, the best you can, and im here if youd like to talk, too:) big hugs n' love nessa |
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