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So Pretty
Contributed by
Saitou-sama
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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How I love to slice you
Limb from limb
To see you writhe
To hear you scream
You look so pretty when you cry
Look up at me with fear
Your lovely eyes, puffy and red
Now weep for me again
You scream so hard a vessel bursts
And scarlet tears fall from your eyes
A gash across the mouth
Your lip is cracked and bleeding
You sink to the floor
I look down and you and grin
A mess you are, so bloody
And with my blade, I slash your face, diagnol
You'll never be so pretty again...
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Saitou-sama
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2004-02-25 23:15:42]
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Re: So Pretty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:19:16 PM AEST
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| Yeah! Right on..... I love these kinds of poems. look up slipknot's lyrics to their cd iowa...read the ones for track 14..you'll love it |
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Re: So Pretty
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by arden on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:41:39 PM AEST
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whoa. dark and em dark lol. that was awesome! good work i really liked this.
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Re: So Pretty
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by JadedExistence on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:01:02 AM AEST
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Very dark and disturbing...I love it. I haven't seen many poems written from this point of view that I liked but I definitely like this one.
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Re: So Pretty
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:41:47 PM AEST
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| Beautifully twisted.... I LOVE it!!! Just the right amount of darkness... beautiful, just beautiful... |
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