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If I Cry
Contributed by
motionless
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:48:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If I Cry,
A million tears,
When I cry,
Will you hear,
As the day,
Breaks to dark,
From now,
Until forever,
You shall hold,
My Heart.
Copyright ©
motionless
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2004-02-25 22:48:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: If I Cry
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:04:07 PM AEST (User
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a little torn are we? |
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Re: If I Cry
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:34:53 AM AEST (User
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EVERY TEAR IS WORTH A HEARTBEART,
WITH EVERY FEAR & EVERY DEFEAT,
HOLD IT NEAR & MAKE IT SWEET,
& 4-EVER HEAR ITS ENTERNITY!
GREAT POEM,ALL YOU GOTTA DO IS OPEN YOUR MIND AS YOU CLOSE YOUR EYES,TO
UNDERSTAND ITS TRUE DEVISE!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: If I Cry
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 11:59:32 AM AEST (User
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Heartfelt, for sure...
I love it when people can post such strong emotions in just a few lines...
Great job and good luck!
Flamingblade |
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