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Hide And Seek
Contributed by
Elf
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh won't you come
and play a game with me?
It'll be much fun.
Just wait and see!
I'll seek,
You hide,
We'll see how fast
I can find.
One and two,
Run fast and strong.
Three and four,
You can't go wrong.
Five and six,
Don't let me see
Seven, eight,
Behind the tree!
Nine then ten,
I turn to see
There you are
looking back at me.
I didn't see
what you thought
I couldn't see,
But you got caught.
I stumbled upon
the love you felt
Unintentional
but still I delt.
I love you now,
thanks to our game
You love me too,
So we still fan our flame.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-02-25 22:41:44]
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Re: Hide And Seek
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:02:26 PM AEST
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| i usually HATE happy love poems but i love the way this is written, sarcastic a little and the intentions are pure. its very well put together. |
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Re: Hide And Seek
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by Shadow on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:34:11 PM AEST
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| Pure with the highest love. The moment of realization and the after effect. The eyes do see and the heart will follow. The structure is good and i love the meaning. good job. |
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Re: Hide And Seek
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 07:58:17 PM AEST
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Another well written one. You're an awesoem writer.
Take care.
David |
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