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Field Of Dreams
Contributed by
Elf
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:21:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Every day
we passed by
that empty field
again you'd cry;
That's the place
I want to go
to have it all
to let it show.
I brushed it off,
thinking not
Of who would go,
Who would be brought.
Late one night,
you asked me then
if I would go,
If so, when.
Later on,
we met up.
That pure field,
we would corrupt.
I had no clue
until we were there
I stood in shock,
I stood and stared.
Your field of dreams
Was mine too
And both our dreams
Became so true.
Now that's our place
for no other to see.
Our place of rest;
Our field of Dreams.
-*To my man*-
Copyright ©
Elf
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2004-02-25 22:21:21]
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by motionless on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:34:50 PM AEST
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| that is really sweet.. and a good piece..... |
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Re: Field Of Dreams
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 08:03:31 PM AEST
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I really, really liked this one. It's awesome... The conclusion Was really cool.
Take care.
David |
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