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Something Goffy
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:40:06 PM in AEST
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oops
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Hereafter I will
not matter for
all my time I
spent with the black cat.
Her personal violence
moody, and ittitable
Pluto will my violence
ever end. Upon me is
a disease that growes with me
Pluto take it away.
She is becoming old
and some what peevish
The more and more Pluto's
rages become a problem
my length of neglect have
seemed to affect her every
being.
Our Friendship lasted
Only a couple of days
but my poor pluto
whatever may come of it
Pluto whatever may come of you.
Copyright ©
lildrama04
... [
2004-02-25 20:40:06]
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Re: Something Goffy
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:01:50 PM AEST
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Re: Something Goffy
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by norticus on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:32:33 AM AEST
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A black cat who's namesake is the Roman god of the dead and ruler of the underworld - that's a good name for a black cat. Or maybe the disease that your talking about is life and you want Pluto to take your life away because your too moody. Anyway, this one induced some thought in me which in itself gains some points so I give this a 4.4 on the Nortiscale.
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