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Anchors and Lifelines
Contributed by
bj
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:37:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Sometimes i feel like a kite
with my back to the clouds
and my face to the earth,
with the wind tickling at my chest
playfully encouraging.
And sometimes i dream,
as that kite might dream,
Of flight unhindered through cloud
and bright...
Free of earth!
Free of string!
But i realize, sadly to myself,
without my string
i'd flop
and tumble
and eventually crash
and be broken.
So i sigh,
regretfully,
now comforted by my string
Copyright ©
bj
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2004-02-25 20:37:12]
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Re: Anchors and Lifelines
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:45:07 PM AEST
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decent yarn . . . (sorry)
A nicely sentimental piece, with a nice image of flying. |
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Re: Anchors and Lifelines
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:45:02 PM AEST
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Great analogy.....I enjoyed this very much..
Jenni |
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Re: Anchors and Lifelines
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by Lionel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:21:10 PM AEST
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| Thats really good. I know who that string should signify. God Bless |
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