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the quilted rag doll
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:34:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There sits in a corner,
A quilted rag doll,
Alone and forgotten,
Blocked out by a wall.
The world goes on,
As she gathers dust,
Cold and alone,
Her heart starts to rust.
She’s been hurt in her life,
Cut and torn,
But she’s patched back up,
Ignoring the scorn.
She sits in her corner,
And there will remain,
Alone and forgotten,
And innocently insane.
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2004-02-25 20:34:55]
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Re: the quilted rag doll
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:57:35 PM AEST
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| Wow! powerful! |
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Re: the quilted rag doll
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:41:15 PM AEST
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WOW..this was magnificently done... it's such a sad write.....
Jenni |
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Re: the quilted rag doll
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:44:12 PM AEST
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It's the exact picture of a painting I once saw of a little rag doll, sitting in a corner. It was all gray tones, such a sad one to look at. This too is really sad.... I think it's really neat how your screename has such a powerful meaning like that. I'm just the smelly jelly belly who fell down a welly.... mmmm..... jelly.......lol
that was the most random thing I've ever said..... wow.
Anyways, the poem--- smashing job.
And I'll just say that if you'd like to talk about...stuff.... "rag doll moments" and what not, I'll be there. pm me anytime =)
God bless
(and hope for happier days),
Ellen
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Re: the quilted rag doll
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:53:33 PM AEST
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| awwwww............ |
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