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salt water tears
Contributed by
quilted_rag_doll
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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A boy sits alone,
Cryin salt water tears.
He would go home,
Save for that which he fears.
A father that drinks,
And beats up his sis,
A mother who cowers,
And doesnt know he exsists.
Hes on his own,
With no one to trust,
His joy is gone,
And his hearts turned to dust.
So he sits forgotten,
Over the years.
All alone,
Cryin salt water tears.
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quilted_rag_doll
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2004-02-25 20:18:33]
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Re: salt water tears
(User Rating: 1 )
by bj on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:44:11 PM AEST
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| good show..i like it much! |
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Re: salt water tears
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:34:16 PM AEST
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Wow..this is so sad..but so well written....
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Re: salt water tears
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:59:41 PM AEST
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| it's great, but kinda depressing.... still... I love it! |
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