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FEILDS OF EMPTINESS
Contributed by
justinblue
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:59:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wondering,thinking
Craveing,wanting,something
but everything leads to nothing
Addictions run rampant on the feilds of emptiness
searching,seeking
Looking for a key in the darkness
Unable to unlock the door of contentness
Trapped,suspended
In a sandstorm of utter confusion
Not knowing truth from illusion
Copyright ©
justinblue
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2004-02-25 19:59:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: FEILDS OF EMPTINESS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:28:29 PM AEST (User
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I really like this one too. It speaks volumes of addiction and what It can wreak upon you, or me, or anyone.
Inspired write. |
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Re: FEILDS OF EMPTINESS
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 12:11:53 PM AEST (User
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very good for just five minutes....you must have been inspired.
Just a quick word of advice.... maybe double check the spelling? In know sometimes you miss it, it happens to everyone....but it's good to check...
great write!
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