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Can We Be More Than Friends
Contributed by
viki
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:46:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love for you hurts me so,
because you're still with him and that I know.
Sometimes I want to cry,
and I wish that you knew why.
I only want to share one bed with you
I don't like the feeling of being with two
Sometimes I feel you're so far away,
but my love for you will always stay.
You say you don't want to be with him
Only your love is what I want to win
Sometimes I wonder if you want to be with me
You two together is what hurts me to see
What I want is for you to want me too,
and love me as I love you.
I don't want to keep inside me all this sadness.
I wish the times with you were endless
This is where my poem ends
Just one question, " Can we be more than friends? "
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viki
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Re: Can We Be More Than Friends
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by Sexygirl on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:00:26 PM AEST
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| This is so beautifully written...so much of your love shines through.....I hope things work out for you.....take care....I kind of wrote something like that too..If your interested check out my poem called "Your Already Taken"... |
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Re: Can We Be More Than Friends
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:30:29 PM AEST
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Good write.... I've asked this question myself already....
Jenni |
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Re: Can We Be More Than Friends
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 01:50:14 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. I love the way you wrote emotion down. I hope things go well for you. -Vicki- |
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Re: Can We Be More Than Friends
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by princess_of_pain on
Saturday, 28th January 2006 @ 11:26:35 PM AEST
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| amazing. great flow. great poem. |
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