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The Guy
Contributed by
AmaNdAsHepArD
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:45:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One night of
Passion and pleasure
Has cost her,
Her life
He was a nice guy
A cute guy
Who knew everything to say
I left with him
For the night,
One night
Passion and pleasure
Was what I felt
Until…
I felt his hands
Around
My neck
What have I done?
One night
Passion and pleasure
Has cost her
Everything
My life
Copyright ©
AmaNdAsHepArD
... [
2004-02-25 17:45:29]
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Re: The Guy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:52:58 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking well done.
Unlike my scary lion poem which required no thought! worth a read though......... |
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Re: The Guy
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:44:35 PM AEST
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ahhhh intense here I hope this really didnt happen to you!
michelle |
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Re: The Guy
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by Kittenfantastico on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:32:28 PM AEST
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| *tears* Woah! Hugs u. I understand. |
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