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Destiny Awaits
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:25:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This dark path that I follow,
Leads to my destiny,
A place filled with sorrow,
A place filled with reality,
Somewhere I can be
Me
I guess I was a bit scared,
But in the end I was glad,
I've taken as much as I can bare,
But my passing will be sad,
To those so near me,
No more fear,
Just destiny
I wish I had a friend to talk to,
Someone I could confide in,
But now its late as I walk through,
The gates of fate laughing,
Because now it is my time,
To leave this world,
To be happy,
Again and again
So now I fall down,
So far away,
Below the ground,
A place where I can stay,
I wont miss you,
You wont miss me,
I'll cry and so will you,
But with my death
We can all get through
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alecfernadez
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2004-02-25 17:25:19]
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Re: Destiny Awaits
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:47:09 PM AEST
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Very, very good and very,very sad you got your point across beautifully.
If you need cheering up apparently wildejohnny's work needs commenting on! |
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Re: Destiny Awaits
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:24:51 PM AEST
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If we die at our own hand that is interfering in the natural fate. It is a sin and terribly destructive to those that love you. Whatever has happened to make you feel this destitute please seek help. There is nothing that happens in life that we cannot deal with even if you have to search for help. The taking of your life is not in the natural state of life and disrupts others fates. Not fair to them, no matter how hard it might be for you to deal with your problem. If you need help please seek it out. There is someone waiting to help.
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Re: Destiny Awaits
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:54:51 PM AEST
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| Nice! i like the thought of the pathway, leading to destiny. And then the way you describe destiny is good too. Then you let on that your a bit afraid, but not too much. Also the laughing gate, to fall, and the end. but i'm running on, sorry. anways, there a lot of emotion and describtion in it. very intresting to hear your views.overall, its great. |
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Re: Destiny Awaits
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:52:12 PM AEST
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| Good write. I understand how you feel. Just know that there ARE people who care for you. Very much. As hard as it may be to see, it's true. Excelent work. I look forward to reading more of your poems. |
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