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Dancing with Finn
Contributed by
merry
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:14:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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echo in the dark
was it your name or not
I no longer hear you
or see you
long shadows cast
cold shivers overtake me
with wishes
and dreams
that fail to come true
as I sit in dimmed corners
and wait for the moon
to rise in the sky
dispelling this gloom
with her silver
necklace of stars
she adorns me with light
and starlight for eyes
that see a future so bright
all in perspective
so neatly aligned
the planets and sages
address me by name
while the spell is thrice spoken
and sadness lifted away
Finn takes my hand
and we dance away
dance away into the dark
~~**~~pagan merry~~**~~
Copyright ©
merry
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2004-02-25 17:14:07]
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:38:19 PM AEST
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| I got good visuals from this,well done |
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:39:05 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem very muck.Keep them coming. comment one of mine please/. |
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:46:25 PM AEST
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| You are remarkably talented. I enjoy all of your poems. This one was terrific. Kie |
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:56:02 PM AEST
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eaqch word danced across my skin and brought me chills this really moved me very dazzling poem
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:42:12 AM AEST
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| Your daydreams are so magical ... yet touched with sadness ... another write that has me thinking ... daisies*****Jan |
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:44:27 AM AEST
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Very enchanting!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dancing with Finn
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:05:41 AM AEST
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magical...Jan stole my word..lol but she is right. There is magic in your pen Gaille and it casts a spell on me each time I read your work.
Roses
Larry |
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