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To me
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:57:34 PM in AEST
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Six feet under is
to some, an end to living
to me...it's welcomed
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Re: To me
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by apollo on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:05:36 PM AEST
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| amazing. |
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Re: To me
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:57:15 AM AEST
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Short and I am afraid rather morbid. Try to see things in a better light. If you are terminally ill then I can understand your thought that you have so aptly put on paper. If you are depressed try writing down on paper all that that you think is wrong in your life. Believe me it helps. I was told twenty years ago that I had Parkinson's disease. I though that my world had come to an end. a friendly Doctor gave me the same advice that I have just given to you and it worked .I wrote out all the hate and bitterness that I had suffered in my life. Then I wrote out all the blessings. The blessings outweighed all of my hate and bitterness and I have not looked back since.
Please give it a try if it does not work for you then write me >I have a broad shoulder that you may cry on and I am a very good listener remember Smile and the World smiles with you.
all the best hugs from bernard. |
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Re: To me
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 12:03:28 AM AEST
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| oooh...:-) venkat |
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Re: To me
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by Justalady on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:59:02 AM AEST
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| I pray this is not your true thinking... but then again there is another approach that can be taken from the words. Most people are so afraid to speak of death and dying, but....death is a part of life and I truly believe that the end should not be so feared. Perhaps your last line is only a reflection that when the end comes it would indeed be welcomed. Hard to know what is in the mind of a writer when written. Hugs to you. June |
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