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Dislike?
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
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Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 12:55:52 PM in AEST
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What is it that people do to make them dislike you? Why do we sit and wait for a little bit of fate? Why do we sit and cry and make others want to die? Why do we do these foolish things? If it makes others dislike you. Why do we act so nice but inside we are not nice? Why do we hide it all? If it only makes us fall? What is it that people do to make them dislike themselves?
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Re: Dislike?
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by zer0 on
Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 01:03:11 PM AEST
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| hmmm, good questions. i think we act nice even when we are not because it's less trouble for the most part. i think people dislike themselves because they are not how they would like to be and are unable to change. why do we do anything? it's just part of being human i guess. |
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Re: Dislike?
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by Tonic on
Saturday, 14th September 2002 @ 12:43:45 AM AEST
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| This poem really makes no sense, it seems like all you were trying to do was get words that rhym and stick them together. Not your best work. |
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Re: Dislike?
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by Knowledge on
Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 01:11:12 AM AEST
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Tonic....I scoff at thee. I know why you said what you did. But Amy's work...if it comes from the heart, it is better than any peice you could come up with.
I mean no offense, but I just wanted to point that out.
"Peace can not be acheived through violence. It can only be acheived through understanding."
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