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Holy Spirit
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uchendu
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:21:35 PM in AEST
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Holy spirit come and speak to us
and guide and always teach us
that all may live in peace with us
as we read your words to comfort us
CHORUS
What can we do without you
what kindness God has on us
to have sent you down to us
what can we do without you
Holy spirit set your eyes on us
turn our unbelief to trust in us
Lord take our sins away from us
and refill your apostolic love in us
CHORUS
What can we do without you
what kindness God has on us
to have sent you down to us
what can we do without you
Holy spirit fall afresh unto us
revealing yourself through us
envelop your holiness over us
to let your glory fill into us
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:51:23 PM AEST
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| Hmmm, two songs in a row I'll have to write one soon. When I started writing poetry in 2000 I wanted to write gospel songs instead. I ended up writing poetry.Maybe some day. comment one of mine please. |
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by Solmyr1404 on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:40:04 PM AEST
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very good song. the first thing I ever wrote was a song five years ago. i don't remember what it was titled now, but it was about God. i wrote it at two in the morning after getting back from a church camp in Texas. read some of my poetry, please.
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:51:20 PM AEST
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Uchendu, this is beautiful..I can almost hear it being sung...
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by Lainda on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 04:37:42 PM AEST
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| It is a good poem with a great message, but the rhyming, same words don't rhyme well and it gets a little repetitive with the "us." |
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 05:46:50 PM AEST
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Very good friend.
So true as we wouldn't be much without the holy spirit.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by uchendu on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:09:44 AM AEST
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| I want all my fans here to always vote my poems whenever they read... this is important to me because I need to see what my fans say reflect in my votes... that will let me know when I am performing below your expectation. I love u all. |
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by Ramfire on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:10:23 PM AEST
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What wonderful verses and chorus. I especially like the verse: "Holy spirit set your eyes on us
turn our unbelief to trust in us
Lord take our sins away from us
and refill your apostolic love in us"
Regards,
Ramfire
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Re: Holy Spirit
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 05:11:36 AM AEST
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| Awww..you have many fans.. very nice.. you can add one more to your list..hahaha..sweet child. venkat |
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