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Gone
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:34:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I miss the way you lit up my life,
like beacon shining on blackest night,
and the way you walked without a care,
arms swinging from here to there.
I miss the way you talked to me,
like there was nowhere else you'd rather be.
The way you laughed, the way you spoke,
the way you made the cleanest jokes.
I miss your eyes, the portals within,
how you kept yourself free of sin.
The way you danced to the music in your mind,
your stunning personality, loving and kind.
I've missed these things, and more it's true,
but most of all, I'm missing you.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-02-25 13:34:45]
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Re: Gone
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:35:12 PM AEST
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| Very touching love is so sweet until the hammer blow.Hang in there hope to see more of your poetry. Oh commeny one of mine please. |
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Re: Gone
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:59:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful yet sad. Kie |
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