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Grain Of Sand
Contributed by
nomie
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:27:15 AM in AEST
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I am a Grain of sand,
So insignificant, so small,
A speck amongst many others,
So hard to find, so easily blown away,
I am part of a collective,
Together we make the shore,
One day that rough sea may wash me away,
Then I'll become part of a new collective,
I'd float around that deep blue ocean,
So much more smaller, more insignificant,
Lost; never to be found again,
May that water never wash me away
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2004-02-25 07:27:15]
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Re: Grain Of Sand
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by nefny on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 07:46:34 AM AEST
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| how very true. Well written Nomie |
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Re: Grain Of Sand
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 09:58:07 AM AEST
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Oh, I like this. Talk about taking the smallest thing and making something significant of it. Fun stuff! Keep up the good work.
Stitch |
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Re: Grain Of Sand
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by fallensilence on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:48:45 PM AEST
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| i thought this was really good. i love poems that are really descriptive and this was very well written. good job. -david |
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