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Poet Drinking
Contributed by
geoffreyalanbest
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:04:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Ah the smell of a rose in its pretty pair, it is so amazingly spare
that is so rare for something so spare
Ah the smell of a rose which makes me tremble below the gongs mighty limbo
It is good is it not
Ah the smell of the rose, almost like to compose what a muse which tastes like booze
Ah I see, little me, great gee
Ah the smell, the rose
bah, givings pure snivens, blanket I say blanket me
rose, smell, ah I say
garden in the goddamn mind, arahi, I me, look haha
rose, oh ah, I saye, what I argah!
Rose!. Rose!, bah, looka
rausa, rouse, rooussa, rous
ra a us
ROSE?
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2004-02-25 03:04:47]
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Re: Poet Drinking
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:17:56 AM AEST
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| This is a good write! |
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Re: Poet Drinking
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 03:50:41 AM AEST
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| very original well done |
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Re: Poet Drinking
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by neglected1 on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:20:23 PM AEST
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| very unique... i have to say it made me "giggle" ... i really likes your free verse made it much more interesting... great job.. dont stop being yourself.. |
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