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death's discovery
Contributed by
crimsondream
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:27:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the warmth of blood
covering my soul
soaked into my mind
ruined my goal
looking at life
through stained glasses
desolation stays
happiness passes
this sodden heart
hard to see
no one will speak
no one to be
oh touch my hand
im reaching out
but all pass by
ignore my doubt
another world
or am i here
am i invisible
is this my fear
i've seen this before
heard these voices
look back on mistakes
and foolish choices
i should be gone
empty thoughts in my head
getting fainter and fainter
i must be dead
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2004-02-25 02:27:15]
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Re: death's discovery
(User Rating: 1 )
by jbrow on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:46:50 AM AEST
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I like this, becaues this is deep on so many levels. it say's so much by saying so little, and more good work.
p's
Gene |
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Re: death's discovery
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:19:06 PM AEST
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| I don't see why you don't like it, I love it!!! Pretty awsome. |
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