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AN INTERRUPTED DREAM (Erotic)
Contributed by
Del
on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:43:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I had a crazy dream last night.
I dreamt I felt someone in bed with me.
It was a little scary at first,
So I flicked on a light to see.
You were in the nude, like me,
A smile on your face and quivering with desire.
You tenderly touched me face, then kissed my lips.
The passion I suddenly felt was like a burning fire.
Your kisses so gentle, felt our tongues embrace.
Experience hands caressing me - simply devine!
Couldn't wait to get closer to you,
So I could make you mine.
We were both so ready to fulfill our desires.
But now I get so hot and bothered and I wonder,
How this heavenly dream would have ended,
Had I not been awakened by that loud crash of thunder.
Copyright ©
Del
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2004-02-25 01:43:58]
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Re: AN INTERRUPTED DREAM (Erotic)
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:45:46 AM AEST
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| Good write....might have done better in speical area...but i like it |
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Re: AN INTERRUPTED DREAM (Erotic)
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:22:20 AM AEST
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*Applauds*Great job Del! Now you always intrigue me with your sensual writes...Being a passion fanatic,I love reading poetry filled with love,desire and yes of course,passion..And you make my reading soooo specially delightful!
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Re: AN INTERRUPTED DREAM (Erotic)
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:15:11 AM AEST
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NICE & NEAT & TWICE THE BODY HEAT! A
VERY VIVID & DESCRIPTIVE ONE,TOO!! YOU
DID GREAT!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: AN INTERRUPTED DREAM (Erotic)
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by MissTea on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 01:51:05 PM AEST
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Sexy!! I like it
MissTea |
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