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Grimfaced god
Contributed by
zer0
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Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 11:14:50 AM in AEST
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Grimfaced god,
He is not a man, no.
Grimfaced god,
Doesn’t understand, no.
Grimfaced god,
Rules with iron hand, oh,
Grimfaced god reigns fire upon the land.
Marinate me with incense, lord,
For I am still quite bland,
Cleanse me down with holy water,
Prepare me now I pray dear father,
Flog my skin with thorns,
Until my flesh is torn,
Whip me ‘till I’m tender,
My fat shall soon be rendered,
Stuff me full with bread and wine,
Keep me fat until the time.
Keep my bones from being broke,
I would not want, lord,
That you choke.
Hang me up and bleed me dry,
This lamb becomes your shepherd’s pie,
Then put me in hell so I can fry,
May the smoke of my burning rise up high,
And tickle your nostrils you greedy swine.
Grimfaced god,
He is not a man, no.
Grimfaced god,
Doesn’t understand, no.
Grimfaced god,
Rules with iron hand, oh,
Grimfaced god rains fire down on all the land.
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Re: Grimfaced god
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by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 01:24:19 PM AEST
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| I like it is nice. I've never seen or heard anyone put God in a poem like that. Matter a fact I like all your poetry I have read |
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Re: Grimfaced god
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 10th September 2002 @ 02:47:56 PM AEST
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| Hmmm..not quite sure what to think about this. I mean it seemed as though you were acknowledging God for his power and reign over all of us...then you put him down by calling him a greedy swine. That kind of changed my thoughts on it. So please clarify for me..were you purposely degrading him?? Or did I just read that wrong?? |
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Re: Grimfaced god
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by zer0 on
Wednesday, 11th September 2002 @ 10:54:49 AM AEST
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*re-reads poem* nope you didn't read it wrong. you did misinterpret though, it's written tongue-in-cheek. and i was not degrading him cause there is no 'him' to degrade.
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Re: Grimfaced god
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by frozensuicide on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:45:36 AM AEST
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i like the way you describe this stuff. its very good! your very creative with your words and hope ya have a nice day! hehe
hug a moose! |
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Re: Grimfaced god
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:03:01 PM AEST
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this was good i am not really into religious poetry but i liked it.. great job
X+X christina X+X |
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