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These Feelings
Contributed by
skelington
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Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:55:26 AM in AEST
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These feelings I feel, shouldn't be felt by anyone. My only wish right now, to not see another rising sun. For if I did, I would feel the pain of life here once more. There is a saying here, "if not born here, you don't belong." Of course I've forgotten all about that. This pain is blinding, almost paralizing. My life should have ended a long time ago, but saved by ignorent luck, I'm stuck. As I write this, time floats on the tears I cry, for I long to be back with her. But always a fool, I solve my problems with the blade, Tarnished blade cutting through, pushed into my vein, blood still stains my hands. As I lie in a pool of selfishness and pity, DEAD.
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Re: These Feelings
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:11:14 AM AEST
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Re: These Feelings
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by capngeorge on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:51:58 AM AEST
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As you continue to write,your pen and not a knife will help you solve your problems.Your not alone nor a fool.Just a soul with an open wound.Pursue the sun and embrace each day.
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