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TARZAN AND JANE
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:58:59 PM in AEST
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The Valley
Of Kings
SultryRose's Signatures
Every one walked
around your ball game
lotion in my eye it hurt, boom!
Was headed to the wash room.
Didn't really know why
you said, stop,let the lady bye.
Then we became Tarzan, jane, in 1985.
when I first came to life.
You lite a magnetic chord
This country gal couldn't avoid.
You took a broken soul
and taught it to glow,
No one can ever take your place
Not in our human race!
You taught me to twinkle-n-shine,
No one can take this luv,(yours, mine).
By
Emy Star
Copyright © Emy Star
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-02-24 23:58:59]
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Re: TARZAN AND JANE
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 12:06:42 AM AEST
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| As usual ur poems are great keep them coming hun! |
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Re: TARZAN AND JANE
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:22:08 AM AEST
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"You lite a magnetic chord
This country gal couldn't avoid.
You took a broken soul
and taught it to glow,"..
mmm..weldone..sweetly beautiful..venkat
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Re: TARZAN AND JANE
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by uchendu on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 10:02:56 AM AEST
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| You wrote fine and you are teaching how to hold on to love here.. you have written something great in this piece. Be informed that you have a sweet touch on writing. |
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Re: TARZAN AND JANE
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by Jacktripper on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 08:58:23 AM AEST
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| I love the characterization of your poetry... I fell into your whole epilogue and like Tarzan you've swung us from your words. Although I'm sure you could have talked a little bit about the jungle....huh...... loved it great work.. |
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