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Death's Pull
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:43:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Should care about makeup
Should care about clothes
Should be thinking of boys
This isn't the life I chose
Instead I think about pain
I tremble in fear
I dream of death
And the whispers I hear
In my own little world
It's so dark and cold
I sit in my room
Wait for darkness to take hold
My instrument of choice
Is a gleaming silver blade
Cutting so deep
Hoping the pain will fade
My emotional torment
Replaced with physical
As the blood flows
I feel death's dark pull
When my mind clouds over
Peace flows through me
My soul is released
And my heart is free
Copyright ©
JadedExistence
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2004-02-24 21:43:50]
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Re: Death's Pull
(User Rating: 1 )
by AmaNdAsHepArD on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:00:51 PM AEST
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i like ur poem there is alot of truth and meaning in it for me........great read
~amanda~
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Re: Death's Pull
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by Arius-Inues on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:09:36 PM AEST
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| this is a lot like the stuff i wribth about, very well wirtten! |
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Re: Death's Pull
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:05:33 PM AEST
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| Loved you poem. Really spoke to me. Great writing, keep it up! |
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