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Tears of a Tome II
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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To open up a page afresh
A man doth stand no longer flesh
Upon the clouds his footsteps dance
Crying rain for lost romance
Hes looking down his eyes aglaze
Golden from the sunlight rays
Lost in thought his heart rethinks
So many chains without the links
Breaking through an angel clear
Crying sad with crimson tear
Her heart is burning, shes searching too
For her stolen soulmate true
She lands upon a cloud so light
Her beauty beams and shes so bright
He looks to her, his words are lost
His body covered in silent frost
He calls to her from heavens gate
She rises to her stolen mate
Her heart aflutter, she races fast
She flies across the heavens vast
Their souls collide, entwined again
Their love blossoms, they cant refrain
Raindrops thunder, tear drops fall
The heavens open, for true loves call
Together now, Forever more
As they open the golden door
Alone to be they never were
She with him and him with her
The book had spoken, its teaching true
The ink had dried and it knew
For love it sung, so gold and pure
It just blossomed on heavens door
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-02-24 19:18:29]
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:35:33 PM AEST
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| absolutely breathtakingly beautiful, what a lovely pair of poems! keep writin' my friend your on a roll! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:36:54 PM AEST
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A Masterpeice...capital M. If the first one is better than this I dont think I should read it as I would probably crush my pen in shame. This poem is flawless.
Hats off to ya pal
Larry |
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by arden on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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Words cannot express how good this poem is. It is truly a masterpiece. Wonderful job keep em coming.
Becky |
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:41:00 PM AEST
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| Aww.. Luke, this is wonderful. You've got an awful lot of talent. |
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 06:46:20 AM AEST
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PLEASE keep writing these!! I am beyond humbled---
*breaks pen in half, shreds notebook, tromps frustrated out of the room*
Great work, Luke.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 01:06:36 PM AEST
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Lovely write - glad I read the other one first as it does lay the groundwork for this one - and alas a happy ending. Excellent.
smiles
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:04:08 AM AEST
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| Ah, thank you Luke ... I couldn't have coped with a sad ending :))) This is just as splendid as the first Tears of a Tome ... your talent is amazing ... I'm humbled beyond words ... *five stars* ... jan |
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Re: Tears of a Tome II
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 04:20:31 PM AEST
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I've gotta hand it to ya.... this was phenomenal..... sweet write =)
(and no, I'm not obligated to say that either.... it's quite true...lol)
Really though, I'm speechless.
God bless,
Ellen |
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