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Every Stable Way
Contributed by
jbrow
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Well you took all, of my love baby, and you gave me nothing in
return. Sometimes I wish that I could; Watch pictures, of you burn.
They say that there’s a thin line between love, and hate. I hate you
baby, but I love you in every stable way. I love you in every stable way.
All that I ever wanted; From you was a little bit of time, so I can
still love you, while I’m in my prime, because just a little bit, of your
love, goes a long, long way. Can you hear what I say baby,
They say that there’s a thin line between love, and hate. I hate you
baby, but I love you in every stable way. I love you in every stable way.
Well they say that there’s a thin line between love, and hate. I hate
you baby, but I love you in every stable way. I love you in every stable
way
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jbrow
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2004-02-24 17:33:32]
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Re: Every Stable Way
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:15:08 PM AEST
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| Good write....i would make one suggestion though....paragraph form is a bit hard to read. Good job though! |
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Re: Every Stable Way
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:08:00 AM AEST
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Hi there,
I think we all feel this some time or other in our lives.
Hang tuff and keep writing.
Good work.
luv, huggs, emy
Thanks so much for your comments on my work. |
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