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Why try?
Contributed by
neglected1
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:24:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why try?
Why do i endeavor to stay awake
Another piece of me lashes out
Try to fake everything immense that's still in me
I got bruises all in-between
Let me seize the ignorance that your hiding
Or possibly its me that has distorted
And I'm left with nothing
What if i gone astray
Would i be the one that is a failure
To me i am gone
I don't need to stay tonight
To face these fears i covet to leave behind
Suffocating from everything i relate to
Watch as i wave goodbye
There is nothing vast in this verve
Stand back and brawl with the things in my head
Wondering why i care through and through
While in the end it was for nil
So what's the purpose
I impugn myself and I enclose nothing
Why try?
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Re: Why try?
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:39:18 PM AEST
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Try because you can... good write, i like yur wordings...
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Re: Why try?
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by capngeorge on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 02:12:14 AM AEST
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In anguish we all write and express our inner beings.Don't stop trying and keep on writing.
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Re: Why try?
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 11:05:12 PM AEST
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Neglected, this is a powerful write..with very potent questions... But I'm afraid, you alone can answer them.....
Good luck...
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