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The Vampiress
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:02:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The night is cold and dark and still
the vampiress has not had her fill
she stalks and follows
her eyes, dark hollows
her prey runs along, fearing the worst
her eyes full of hunger because of the thirst
a white bloodstained dress catches his eye
and upon seeing it, he starts to cry
he cries for a lost love, as fangs prick his neck
and he falls, lifeless onto the deck
the Vampiress has had her fill
happy, because she's made her kill
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2004-02-24 17:02:47]
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Re: The Vampiress
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:06:39 PM AEST
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a happy vampiress?!? curious, peculiar, yet maybe it's a sick/sadistic/crazy kind of happy... interesting write!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Vampiress
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:09:40 PM AEST
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I liked this a lot - very dark and I was able to imagine clearly the expression on his face, thanks to your descriptive ability!
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Re: The Vampiress
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:12:05 PM AEST
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| this is well done! keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Vampiress
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:03:09 PM AEST
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i love this.. beautifully dark..
charlotte x_x_x |
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