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Achingly So At Times
Contributed by
jaeann
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:37:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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loving you now more than yesterday
achingly so at times.......
not one of those would i now trade
the future tastes so divine
a symbol of promise makes all the difference
not the vow or even the day........
all that's ever wanted is the promise
we'll always be going the same way
long years and shortened times
struggles and all the like.........
love creates the stars aligned
and prepares the walker's hike
stronger is the soul's connection
achingly so at times.....
loving each other is fate's direction
her purpose is ever sublime
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2004-02-24 16:37:09]
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Re: Achingly So At Times
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:40:08 PM AEST
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wonderful....missed reading your writes
Shari |
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Re: Achingly So At Times
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:05:10 PM AEST
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| Very well stated! |
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Re: Achingly So At Times
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:15:54 PM AEST
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Jaeann, we have missed your wonderful poetry, achingly at times........and now you are back, and your poetry is just that......smooth, and I detect something new....I'm not sure what......but I like it even more than before.....it's simply great!
love you
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Re: Achingly So At Times
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:46:15 PM AEST
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This is amazingly poignant. I search for this kind of love. Maybe, just maybe, someday it will find me. I have never read your work before as I am new here. You have a lovely soft style.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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