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Poerotic
Contributed by
Merry
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:40:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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he held me in thrall with his words
so deeply disturbed and disturbing
I followed without question
not knowing his meaning
wanting to believe him
wanting to want him
such is the peril I put myself in
exposing too much
vulnerable beyond the skin
the heart gave in
to such terrible mischief
what was held in the balance
then never retrieved
thrashing in the throes
of his particular demons
I learned too late
what I had lost
in the solitude
in the quietness
that once was my soul
relinquish it now
and forever he said
taking control
of me, body and soul
*
!!
~*~
!!
*
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-02-24 15:40:38]
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Re: Poerotic
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:45:28 PM AEST
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dark, lovely darkness, save us all... what am i babling on?!? good write!!
~Remy~ |
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Re: Poerotic
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:09:21 PM AEST
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| time to turn off the puter, slowly back away.... heh, excellent example here, ouchies too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Poerotic
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:38:37 PM AEST
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| This is really good! |
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Re: Poerotic
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:36:06 PM AEST
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| You gave me goosebumps. Mysterious and enthralling. Well done. Kie |
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