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Escape
Contributed by
remy
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 02:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you're a lecher in my throat...
so coarse yet beautiful...
passing by your deposits and callings
stop, think and cry now that i'm falling
remember when we smiled at the small things
oh yes i remember...
well i can't swallow this...
of course it's ludicrous...
but in my eye lies untainted visions
long before your spear-side incisions
preparations call for another collision
i remember...
try to calm recurring delusions
no more sweat in startled dreamscapes
it couldn't be lost still seclusion
please take this mess and let me escape
you're a siren in my throat...
so darkened and mystical...
walk away from regressions appalling
coughing up this thing that is mauling
remember what it felt like to not be falling
oh yes remember...
well take a look at this...
yes it's so ridiculous...
you can cut away with your decisions
still i'll hold fast to my precision
so we go as it furthers the division
remember...
try to calm reccuring illusions
no more tears in sorrowed dreamscapes
stalled and stung by your obtrusions
take your own mess and let me escape
now it's cold but i'll get through
hellbented hold on far too few
if you knew, if you would see
if i would go, if i might be
then i'd swallow this thing down...
such a sweet and timely sound...
falling down...
try to calm recurring diffusions
no more breath in pointed dreamscapes
taking down these needless allusions
i'll forget this mess and escape
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-02-24 14:58:24]
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Re: Escape
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by jbrow on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:09:32 PM AEST
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I like this one alot.
P's
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Re: Escape
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:13:13 PM AEST
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this is so beautifully written and hopeful.....
:)
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Re: Escape
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:17:49 PM AEST
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| This is a good write. Good job! |
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Re: Escape
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:25:13 PM AEST
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"you're a siren in my throat...
so darkened and mystical..."
Very good indeed. |
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Re: Escape
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:33:51 AM AEST
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| Very good Remy. You're very complex: do you know that? |
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Re: Escape
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by secretwind on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 01:43:13 AM AEST
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wow....perfection has been seen from the shadows where i watch flows come and go...this is excellent.....
The Wind..... |
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