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Wake Up
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:01:06 AM in AEST
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The door never shut on her party girl life,
lived with party girl gusto,
never meant to be wife.
She drank and she smoke with party girl flair,
she could ride you all night without messing her hair.
She'd greet every morning with party girl style,
and love a little more,
maybe work for awhile.
Until she woke from her party girl sleep,
to vomit in the toilet,
and stare at swollen feet.
Then the feeling in her party girl stomach went cold,
When she realized she'd have,
a party girl of her own.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-02-24 10:01:06]
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Re: Wake Up
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:41:37 AM AEST
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That was a work or perfection. I am gobsmacked by this one my friend. Such a great message and so very well written.
Hats off to ya for this,
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Re: Wake Up
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:52:33 AM AEST
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| ~:*wow*:~ hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Wake Up
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:57:16 AM AEST
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that would truly be a wake up call - excellent write
when you party you pay the price
merry |
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Re: Wake Up
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by deathdrop on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:35:46 AM AEST
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| truthfully magnificent! one i'm remember, thankyou for printing it in my head more clearly than some school every can!! |
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Re: Wake Up
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by misheleluv on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 11:30:02 AM AEST
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You paint a realistic picture here,
so true to life, as we all have to face the consequences of our actions...
very well done!
Michelle |
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