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HEAT OF LOVE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 09:57:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Young love is a flame, very pretty, bright.
Hurry, skurry, flurry, fever of excitement!
Flare up, Flame up, Fire up, Frenzy night!
Refreshing, intensifying, exciting, never stagnant!
Young love can be fickle, only light
and flickerng.
With irregularity, uncertainty, with aching.
Frequency, repetition, many times, oftness.
Never enough, again and again,
with braveness.
The heat of love for the older disciplined,
is like hot coals burning unquenchable.
Security of action, slow going, familiar, usual.
No less passionate, by any means, comfortable.
Like Frosting on a cake, covers already total!
Risen above many concerns, troubles,
life itself.
More giving, sacrificing, forgetting oneself.
Endearing, amorous glances, true feelings
of each other.
An enduring love, tested for years,
a strong anchor!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
February 23, 2004
"And so it is, young
or old, a wonderful
gift from our creator!"
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
... [
2004-02-24 09:57:11]
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:09:57 AM AEST
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That was like a breath of fresh air!!!! Thank you.
A big red rose for ya :o)
Larry |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:21:10 AM AEST
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| so true so true, frosting i likes better too lol, am out of cake mix but your poem is simply yummy connie, much wisdom here, beautiful as always:) huggies, woofies n' love nessa |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:35:41 AM AEST
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I just wrote something similar for my husband about the difference between real love and the kind we see in the movies. I love your outlook! Keep it coming.
Stitch |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by norm on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 10:39:14 AM AEST
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The Critters Lady pens greatness
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Way back in time when I was young,
Like Critters says, Just sex was sung,
But now the time has come with love,
That has a mandate from above... |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 11:20:52 AM AEST
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| I got a taste for frostin this morning! You made me smile again! Old or young we all need a little passion and lovin.....Loved this one ConSue. Kie |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 01:41:11 PM AEST
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| I agree with Kie Old or young we all need it it helps make us live longer with love in our hearts! Christina |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:26:32 PM AEST
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THE LONGER IT GOES THE STRONGER THE HOLD! FEWER SURPRISES & UNKNOWN FEARS!! GREAT POEM!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: HEAT OF LOVE
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 06:02:22 PM AEST
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Hmmm, I love cake. Cake always has to have frosting, and I always like a little dollop of whipped cream on top. This poem is yummy! I love it.
Love you too, hugs,
Rita |
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