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Captives In The Free Land
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 04:52:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There is a prison out here in wonderland
The guards are armed to the teeth
And the inmates are you and me
Meals are always cold and raw
Flies are present, dwelling along side of us
We love them like brothers
Prison life isn't bad because of T.V.
Cable has provided an escape
And riots are controlled with Science Fiction
Behind the bars of freedom
We sit like dogs tied with mental leashes
Captives in our free land
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2004-02-24 04:52:37]
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Re: Captives In The Free Land
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 05:52:02 AM AEST
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| Well thought out, i especially liked the line 'and riots are controlled by science fiction' keep up the good work. |
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Re: Captives In The Free Land
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by twinkletoes on
Wednesday, 25th February 2004 @ 08:31:09 PM AEST
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Only in a free land could you write this. Don't take what little freedom you have for granted.
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Re: Captives In The Free Land
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 04:17:51 AM AEST
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Am I hearing someone who hates the smallness and poverty of modern living as much as I do? You must get this from being alone in the outdoors. I can feel this completely.
Keep it up! |
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